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Hey Maat! Welcome to YWS!!!

Hey Welcome to YWS!!!

I like it. I think it was really creative to actually make it a letter...it's cool. My favorite part was: I do hope you will not worry though. I remember ...

You did a really good job on this...I agree with them. There are alot of mispelled words and then there are all the things that Shadowdancer commented on. Those were ...

I loved it. Good job on writing it. My favorite part was: But you’re so beautiful, and forbidden. I need you, for this one moment, I need you. I hate ...

Yeah i was being without internet and still am except for when i sneak on at school or get a chance at the public library. I've really missed you guys. ...

Thanks for letting me know!

I haven't been here in forever and am really confused. What's been going on around here? There are new changes and everything. Anything interesting happen?

Hey I'm Kay Kay! I won't be on here very much to see your stuff and get to know you, but Welcome anyways!

Chapter Fourteen: I was just about to blow out the candle on my nightstand when there was a knock on the door. Strange, I thought. No one ever comes to ...

I'm going to crit both. Word of advise though, when you post another chapter put it in a new post so the people who critted chp one will crit 2 ...

Hey welcome to YWS :D I'm kayla

You did a good job...it's a good poem. Anyways, the only mistakes i saw were that there was no punctuation and you didnt capitalize the first word of every new ...

Oh thanx for reminding me how much of a pain school really is...j/k. I liked it though. Good job. Nice pic by the way...i really liked it.

Paid? LOL i think you enjoyed writing it.... Anyways, i liked this part: You are the show, the show is unmissable and if you like it, it will run for ...